Question

【题目】假如你是新华中学的高一学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom给你发电子邮件，询问你对高中生活的感受和你对新的一年的打算。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件。

1. 对高中生活的感受；

2. 对新的一年的打算（如学习，交友，感恩父母等）。

注意：

1. 词数：100词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom，

How is everything going on with you?

I am looking forward to hearing from you. Wish you happy!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Tom，

How is everything going on with you? It has been half a year since I became a senior one student. I feel it an honor to be a student here, because there are many excellent teachers and outstanding students. I’m also fond of the learning environment here, where we can compete and learn from each other.

What upsets me is that although I have tried my best to study hard, I still find it hard to catch up with my classmates. I’m especially poor in English, so in the coming new year, I’ll study harder. In addition, I’ll learn to share housework with my parents who give all their love and care to me.

I am looking forward to hearing from you. Wish you happy!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据要求写一篇书信要求：1. 对高中生活的感受；2. 对新的一年的打算（如学习交友，感恩父母等）。需要注意的有：1. 词数：100词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。需要根据要求写，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了三段式的结构，开门见山，运用平常的词语却写的新颖，别致，内容丰富。让人产生联想，简单易懂，虽然不华丽，却很朴实。没有过多的空话。文章运用了一般现在时和将来时穿插。用了很多语法知识，运用了第一人陈为主的叙述顺序。