Question

7．假如你叫李华，请根据下面提示以"My new school life"为题，给你的笔友Mike写封信，介绍你的学校生活．要点如下：
1．校园环境和设施
2．老师
3．同学
4．感受
注意：词数100左右 （开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Mike，
Let me tell you something about my new school life．
                                                                         
Look forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息请根据下面提示以"My new school life"为题，给你的笔友Mike写封信，介绍你的学校生活，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：校园环境和设施；老师；同学；感受 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：a huge garden大花园；live in居住，生活；make great progress取得巨大进步；make new friends交新朋友；full of challenges充满了挑战；a bright future美好的未来；keep fit保持健康；
There're green trees and grass and colorful flowers everywhere．（高分句型一）
 The school is not so large，but the teachers are all kind and I believe I'll make great progress with them teaching me．（高分句型二）
Of course，I'll also do more exercise to keep fit．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      Let me tell you something about my new school life． My new school is as beautiful as a huge garden．There're green trees and grass and colorful flowers everywhere．（高分句型一）My new school has a big cafeteria，a place for us to have meals．There are residence halls for students to live in．The school is not so large，but the teachers are all kind and I believe I'll make great progress with them teaching me．（高分句型二）My classmates are very friendly and I've made many new friends here．I feel that my new life is very exciting，but I also realize that it is full of challenges．I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a bright future．Of course，I'll also do more exercise to keep fit．（高分句型三）
      Look forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．