Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear sir,

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang'an Road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it be?come louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thanks you very much.

Customer Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear sir,

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on bought

Chang'an Road. We all like A shape of the refrigerator.

the

And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it A turned on. At first it is low

is (或去掉it)

.but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the becomes

matter worse,it even stops working sometimes. We all feel

disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you disappointed

please send a people to repair it? I will A at home man/person be/stay

this weekend. Please call me before you come 、here. My

telephone number is 66065531. Thanks you very much.

Thank

Customer Li Ming