题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Decades ago, I was a child. Hoped I could have an opportunity to attend college, my parents were pushed me to study hard. I experienced pressure at the first time. I did that my parents expected me to do because I didn’t want to let them off. I was born in a rich family, and I really knew life was not easy. All the things my parents did were for their hope that I would lead better life in the future.
Finally thanks to their push and the pressures, I had a chance to go to college and am able to meet my parents’ expectations. I made them.
【答案】
【解析】这是一篇叙述文。本文主要讲了作者的父母希望作者能有一个好的将来,所以他们督促作者努力学习,考上大学,最终作者也没有让父母失望,考取了大学。
第一处:考查非谓语动词。Hope与my parents是主动关系,所以这里需用现在分词。故需将Hoped 改为Hoping。
第二处:考查动词,push为及物动词,push sb to do sth督促,迫使某人做某事,所以这里不需要be动词were,故将were删除。
第三处:考查连词。at the first time在第一次,为介词短语,,后面需接成分,这里需改为for the first time第一次,为副词短语。故需将at改为for。
第四处:考查关系词。that在句中只能作一种成分,而这句中did后有一个that引导的宾语从句,而从句中expect后也缺少宾语,所以这里需用what,可作双重身份,即引导宾语从句,又作expect的宾语。故需将that改为what。
第五处:考查动词短语。Let sb down让某人失望。这里的意思是作者不想让父母失望,let off耗尽。故需将off改为down。
第六处:考查连词。这里的意思是我出生在一个富裕的家庭,我知道生活不易,该句前后应是转折关系,and表示顺承,并列关系。but表示转折。故需将and改为but。
第七处:考查固定搭配。lead a good/better life,过着好的生活,为固定搭配,所以这里lead后缺少a。
第八处:考查不可数名词。pressure作压力讲时为不可数名词,所以这里需将pressures改为pressure。
第九处:考查时态。and并列连接的两个动词时态需一致,由前面的had以及本文时态可知,这里需用一般过去时,所以需将am改为was。
第十处:考查固定用法。Make it表示成功做到某事,为一种固定用法,故需将them改为it。