题目内容
【题目】请根据下面的英文短诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇标题为Hold Fast To Dreams 的短文。
Dreams
By Langston Hughes
Hold fast to dreams,
For if dreams die,
Life is a broken-winged bird,
That can never fly.
Hold fast to dreams,
For when dreams go,
Life is a barren field,
Frozen only with snow.
内容要求: 1.对该诗歌的理解; 2.对观点进行阐述或举例说明; 3.恰当的结尾。
注意:1.不得照抄短诗原文。
2.必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开。
3.词数:120左右。 生词:barren adj 贫瘠的
Hold Fast To Dreams
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【答案】
The poem vividly describes that not only should we develop our great dreams but also we should hold fast to them through our life and our study.
As the saying goes , life without an aim is like sailing without a compass. Dreams play such a significant part that we must stick to them. To begin with, if we set up a dream, we'll be filled with confidence and energy all over,which motivates us to work hard to live up to it. Besides, it takes constant efforts to make our dreams come true , so it is of much importance for us to make the most of our time and try our best to accumulate more knowledge and strengthen our abilities in every aspect. What's more, never will we give up or lose heart whenever faced with difficulties so long as we hold fast to our dreams.
Taking all the factors into consideration, it is high time for us to hold fast to our dreams.Only in this way can we achieve success in the end.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇半开放式的作文,考生在写作时要注意短诗的重心,切忌偏题,诗主要是对这个老师进行了描述,考生要紧紧抓住这些特点,适当展开自己的想象,结合生活学习中老师的特点。在写作的过程中注意句型的多样化和连接词的使用。要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点,要求观点明确,驾驭语言的能力强,选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇,也要运用多种句型,让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思,可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来,使文章成为一个整体。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语play such a significant part起重要作用;stick to坚持;To begin with开始;be filled with充满;What's more而且;give up放弃;The poem vividly describes that not only should we develop our great dreams but also we should hold fast to them through our life and our study这个句子中运用not only ,but also连接两个句子,第一个需要部分倒装;As the saying goes , life without an aim is like sailing without a compass.这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句;Only in this way can we achieve success in the end这个句子运用到only+状语+部分倒装;
【题目】随着经济的发展和人们生活水平的提高,近年各地旅游景点人满为患,尤其是一些历史名胜,如长城、紫禁城和各地大型博物馆等等。看到这种趋势,一些旅游景点开始考虑提高门票,并把此消息在各大网站上发布,这在全国引起了一场热烈的讨论,观点如下:
支持者: | 1. 促进当地经济的发展。 2. 景点需要雇佣更多的工作人员提供服务并尽快清理游客留下的垃圾。 3. 门票提高可以确保建筑物的维修。 |
反对者: | 1. 人们将失去休闲放松的地方。 2. 阻碍人们尤其是青少年了解中国的历史和文化。 3. 对于有历史意义的名胜政府应该提供经济援助,而不是依赖民众多掏腰包。 |
你的观点: | 表明态度,列举至少两点理由 |
参考词汇:maintenance 维修(n.) financial 经济的,金融的
注意:1. 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 字数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总字数。
With the development of our country’s economy and the people’s living standards improving,a lot of tourism attractions in different areas have witnessed a great increase of tourists in recent years, in which case some tourism sites are considering adopting higher tickets fees and have given out the news on various websites. People have held a heated discussion about it and opinions on it are divided ._____________________________.