Question

在现今资讯科技发达的年代，人们可从不同途径获得所需信息，从而忽视了阅读。请你以“Reading enriches the mind.” 为题，写一篇120词左右的短文，简要分析时弊，谈谈你对阅读的理解和看法。

注意：文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Possible version:

Reading enriches the mind

Today, in the age of advances in information technology, it is very convenient for people together the information they need. As a result, more and more people neglect the importance of reading, which, I think, is not a healthy phenomenon.

We can’t deny that reading can, first of all, broaden our view and enrich the mind. As we all know, books reveal to us a mysterious wonderland in which we will obtain various experience. We learn to look beyond our immediate surroundings to the horizon and a landscape far away from home. Secondly, reading plays an important part in the character development and personal growth. As a proverb puts it, knowledge makes a gentleman.

In a word, people can’t live without books. Remember not to put all the energy on the Internet and the like but to leave some time to read various books.

【解析】

试题分析：拿到作文题目，首先要认真审题，这是一篇提纲作文，在现今资讯科技发达的年代，人们可从不同途径获得所需信息，从而忽视了阅读。请你以“Reading enriches the mind.” 为题，写一篇120词左右的短文，简要分析时弊，谈谈你对阅读的理解和看法,所以要用一般现在时。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求字数120词左右。

考点：提纲作文

点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。