题目内容
16.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分.
I was very excited that I could not fall asleep in last night.Yesterday morning,I went to a big gardening company for a interview.When I was a little child,helping my grandfather grow flower in the garden was my favorite.All what I wanted to be was a gardener.When I get to the company,I found there were many people waiting there but I didn't know whether I could get the job.While waited,I helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road.Lucky,I was the only one that finally got the job,because the manager decided to give the job someone who was helpful.
分析 本文是作者回忆自己找工作的经历.
解答 I was very excited that I could not fall asleep in last night.Yesterday morning,I went to a big
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gardening company for a interview.When I was a little child,helping my grandfather grow flower
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in the garden was my favorite.All what I wanted to be was a gardener.When I get to the company,
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I found there were many people waiting there but I didn't know whether I could get the job.While
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waited,I helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road.Lucky,I was the
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only one that finally got the job,because the manager decided to give the job∧someone who was helpful.
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71.very-so 考查副词. 句意:昨天晚上我是如此的激动以至于无法入睡. so…that 固定搭配,意思是:如此…以至于.
72.去掉last night前面的in 考查介词搭配. 有last修饰的名词前面不用再加介词in.
73.for后面的a-an 考查冠词. interview是可数名词,而且是元音开头,应该用an.
74.flower-flowers 考查名词单复数.句意:我小时候帮助爷爷种花是我最爱的事.flowers用复数形式表类指.
75.what-that 考查定语从句.句意:我就想做一个园艺工人.All后面I wanted to be是定语从句,what不是定语从句的关系词,所以去掉.本题也可以去掉all,what I wanted to be是主语从句,但是what需要大写.
76.get to-got to 句意:当我到达公司的时候,这里在回忆面试的情况应该用过去式got.
77.but-and 考查连词,句意:很多人在等待面试,而且我也不知道能不能得到这份工作,由此可知,前后不是转折关系,而是并列关系.用and表并列关系.
78.waited-waiting 考查分词.当从句的主语和主句的主语一致时,从句的主语可以省略,谓语动词用-ing形式,所以用waiting.
79.Lucky-Luckily 考查副词.句意:幸运的是,我是唯一一个得到这份工作的人,用副词修饰全句.
80.someone前面加to 考查介词搭配.give something to somebody,给某人某物.
点评 通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,尤其是有的行文逻辑方面的错误在看单句时难以发现错误.在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行分句改错.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.本文的阅读和改错,考查学生的定语从句和动词时态、名词、副词、形容词的用法、冠词的区别等.