Question

假定你是李华，在报上看到北京华夏大学将于2014年2月16日举办为期一周的“中国语言文化冬令营”活动。你的美国朋友Mike计划来中国旅游并了解中国文化，请写邮件介绍此项活动并建议他参加。

2014中国语言文化冬令营
主要课程	日常会话??? 汉字书写?
主要活动	京剧，中国民乐，中国绘画欣赏，烹饪，游览故宫，天坛，长城
活动时间	2014年2月16日—22日

注意：

信件要包括以上内容，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。

词数100左右，头尾已经给出，不计入总数。

参考：? 2014中国语言文化冬令营?

2014 Chinese Language and Culture Winter Camp

天坛?? the Temple of Heaven

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike

You mentioned in your last letter that you hoped to come to China to learn about Chinese culture. I’d like to introduce a camp to you, which is called “2014 Chinese Language and Culture Winter Camp”. It is organized by Beijing Huaxia University from Feb. 16th to 22nd, 2014. In the camp they will teach not only some simple everyday Chinese but also how to write Chinese characters. They will also introduce Beijing Opera, Chinese folk music as well as Chinese Painting. The most important of all is that you will have a chance to learn to try Chinese cooking. Sight-seeing tours include the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven and the Great Wall.

???? You may sign up for this winter camp if you are interested. If you have any questions, please let me know.

Best wishes.

? ?????????????????? Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求写一封电子邮件，向美国朋友Mike介绍一个冬令营活动，并建议他参加此项活动。信件的要点以表格的形式列出，一目了然，比较容易构思。注意信的格式，使用第一人称进行写作，不能出现拼写、标点错误，尽量使用定语从句、名词性从句、非谓语动词等语法知识，来增加亮点。必须用上参考词汇，注意时态的正确使用。

【亮点说明】范文分为两段，第一段主要介绍冬令营，第二段提出建议。范文使用了一些重要的句型和语法知识：固定句型I’d like to introduce a camp to you；宾语从句how to write Chinese characters；非限制性定语从句which is called “2014 Chinese Language and Culture Winter Camp”；固定搭配not only some simple everyday Chinese but also how to write Chinese characters；表语从句that you will have a chance to learn to try Chinese cooking；能够用上定语从句、名词性从句，使得作文增色不少；

范文还使用了一些短语和固定搭配：as well as；have a chance to learn...；learn to try Chinese cooking等，范文做到了简洁明了、语意连贯。

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