Question

【题目】短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Of all the books I've read,I like Robinson Crusoe best,that is one of the famous British writer Daniel Defoe's greatest work.The main character of the novel is Robinson Crusoe,who was trapped on a disaster during a boat tour. He had to swim to a lonely island and lived there for many years.There were no other people on a remote island,and there was no food for him.He fight against various natural disasters and diseases alone brave.He tried his best to overcoming all the difficulties and saved finally.After reading the novel,I am really moved by Robinson Crusoe's spirit,which has been taught me that something is difficult if you go with courage.

Answer 1

【答案】1.第一句 that→which

2.第一句 work→works

3.第二句 on→in

4.第四句 a→the

5.第五句 fights→fought

6.第五句 brave→bravely

7.第六句 overcoming→overcome

8.第六句 saved前加was

9.第七句 去掉been

10.第七句 something→nothing

【解析】这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，所以第一句 that→which。

One of + 可数名词的复数形式，所以第一句 work→works.

Be trapped in是固定用法，意思是被困在。

特指“这次航海旅行”，所以用定冠词。

发生在过去的事情，所以使用一般过去时。

用副词修饰动词。

Try one’s best to do sth. 是固定用法，意思是尽某人最大的努力做某事。

“他”和“救”之间是被动关系，所以用被动语态。

Robinson Crusoe's spirit与teach之间是主动关系，所以用主动语态。

句意：鲁滨逊的精神教会我，如果你有勇气，没有任何事情是困难的。所以第七句 something→nothing。