Question

3．假定你是李华．你在校英文报上看到了一则招聘启事．
A Research Assistant Wanted
Our university in the countryside is looking for a research assistant．Candidates must have strong computing skills．Ideally suits a graduate from computing fields．
Contact Albert Lee at Lee@Yahoo．com for application or for more information．
请阅读启事并写一封应征邮件．内容要点如下：
1）陈述应征原因；
2）说明应征相关经验；
3）被聘用后的决心．
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头和结尾已为你写好．
Dear Ms Lee，
I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）I believe I can do the job well，so I'd like to apply for it．
I'm Li Hua，a boy aged 18，and I have just graduatedfrom high school．I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）Besides，I was chosen to take part in a computer design competition．Luckily our group took the first place in it．Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）Thus，I'm convince that I'm qualified for the job．
Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你在校英文报上看到了一则招聘启事，阅读启事并写一封应征邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：1）陈述应征原因；2）说明应征相关经验；3）被聘用后的决心．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：in need of急需；apply for申请；graduate from从…毕业；be interested in对…感兴趣；used to do过去常常；Besides另外；take part in 参加；take the first place 取得第一名；Thus因此；devote oneself to致力于；
I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）
I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）
Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）
Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Ms Lee，
      I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）I believe I can do the job well，so I'd like to apply for it．
      I'm Li Hua，a boy aged 18，and I have just graduated from high school．I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）Besides，I was chosen to take part in a computer design competition．Luckily our group took the first place in it．Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）Thus，I'm convince that I'm qualified for the job．
      Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）
      I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．