题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你们学校的英国交换生Jeff准备参加为外国人举办的比赛 “讲中国成语比赛” (Chinese Idiom Story Competition),他发邮件请你帮忙。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 热心答应提供帮助;
2. 提供实用准备建议;
3. 询问见面时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jeff,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jeff,
Knowing that you are participating in the Chinese Idiom Story Competition for foreigners, I am more than glad to help.
Here are some suggestions before we meet. Firstly, you may as well choose the most commonly used idioms from interesting stories. Besides I advise fully dig into their meanings and origins to explore their cultural history, which helps make your storytelling highly interesting and impressive.
I hope the suggestions can be practical to you. By the way, when and where would you like to meet? Look forward to further discussion with you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文为一篇应用文。为英国交换生Jeff参加讲中国成语比赛提供帮助。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求:1. 热心答应提供帮助;
2. 提供实用准备建议;
3. 询问见面时间地点。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
participate in; suggestions; may as well; commonly; practical; further
第三步:连词成句
You are participating in the Chinese Idiom Story Competition for foreigners.
Here are some suggestions before we meet.
You may as well choose the most commonly used idioms from interesting stories.
I hope the suggestions can be practical to you.
Look forward to further discussion with you.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.文章的结构顺序:答应提供帮助;提供建议;询问见面时间地点。
2.过渡词:firstly; besides; by the way
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰
第五步:修改润色