题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你作为交换生正在英国学习,你所在城市博物馆正在展出来自中国的文物(relics)因而需要招聘懂一定中国文化的自愿者作为讲解员,需要写一封信给博物馆申请做一名讲解员。
要点如下:1.写信目的。2.个人能力优势。3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头结尾已为你写好,不计入词数。
Dear Sir or Medam,
My name is Li Hua.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. As an exchange student from China, I am studying in a local school. I am really delighted to learn that a guide for your Chinese cultural relic exhibition is required and I’m confident that I am truly fit for the position.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that I am from China and used to be a volunteer in Shanghai Museum and quite familiar with Chinese relics. Furthermore, being an outgoing and optimistic boy, I am good communicating with others and introducing Chinese culture to the world is always my honor and my pleasure. Finally, there is no problem with my spoken English, as I have lived here for almost a year and I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.
I would really appreciate it if you can offer me the chance to be a volunteer in your museum. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,申请做一名讲解员。。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分总法
总分总法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.写信目的。
2.个人能力优势。
3.能做的事情。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be delighted to; be supposed to do; have no difficulty communicating with ;formal; casual; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1.My name is Li Hua. As an exchange student from China, I am studying in a local school.
2.I am really delighted to learn that a guide for your Chinese cultural relic exhibition is required and I’m confident that I am truly fit for the position.
3. I am good communicating with others and introducing Chinese culture to the world is always my honor and my pleasure.
4.Finally, there is no problem with my spoken English, as I have lived here for almost a year and I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.
5.I would really appreciate it if you can offer me the chance to be a volunteer in your museum. I am looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改