Question

2．为了放松心情和表达感激之情，在不考虑预算的情况下，你打算在高考结束之后邀请你的一位家人和你一起度过快乐的一天．请按要求用英语写一篇短文，具体要求如下：
1．说明你会邀请谁和你度过这一天？为什么？
2．说明你会去哪里？做些什么事？为什么？
3．恰当的结尾
注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计入总数；
2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息；
3．词数：120左右
After the National College Entrance Examination is over，not worried about the budget，I am going to …After the National College Entrance Examination is over，not worried about the budget，I am going to share the chance with my mother to relax and express my appreciation，who has devoted herself to raising me until now．【高分句型一】For one thing，strictassheis，she neverfailsto show her care and consideration．For another，she has made me learn much knowledge never mentioned in my textbooks．（说明会邀请谁以及原因）
It is because of doing the heavy housework herself for long that she has been in poor health．Therefore，early in the morning，I will teach her to play Taiji in the nearest park，which will help her build up her body．Besides，considering she likes plants，I intend，after breakfast，to go to the botanic garden with her，where diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scenes will certainly impress her．（说明计划去的地点、将要去做的事以及这么做的原因）
In short，I sincerely hope that she will have a relaxed，happy day．（以自己的心愿来结尾）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
1．For one thing，strict as she is，she never fails to show her care and consideration．
首先是因为，虽然她很严厉，但是她一直对我展示着她的关心和体贴．
strict as she is，as引导的让步状语从句，可将表语置于句首用倒装结构．
2．I intend，after breakfast，to go to the botanic garden with her，where diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scenes will certainly impress her．
早餐后，我打算和她一起去花园，花园里各种不同的植物和令人激动的美景一定会给她留下深刻的印象的．
where diverse kinds of plants…where引导的定语从句，用于对先行词botanic garden 做进一步的补充说明．

解答 After the National College Entrance Examination is over，not worried about the budget，I am going to share the chance with my mother to relax and express my appreciation，who has devoted herself to raising me until now．【高分句型一】For one thing，strict as she is，she never fails to show her care and consideration．For another，she has made me learn much knowledge never mentioned in my textbooks．（说明会邀请谁以及原因）
It is because of doing the heavy housework herself for long that she has been in poor health．Therefore，early in the morning，I will teach her to play Taiji in the nearest park，which will help her build up her body．Besides，considering she likes plants，I intend，after breakfast，to go to the botanic garden with her，where diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scenes will certainly impress her．（说明计划去的地点、将要去做的事以及这么做的原因）
In short，I sincerely hope that she will have a relaxed，happy day．（以自己的心愿来结尾）

点评 考生在写作时，感情真挚，原因分析到位，令人信服，固定搭配、时态与语态的使用熟练．考生在平时应加强相关词汇、固定搭配的积累．