Question

17．假如你是李华，现在是广西大学的一名新生，请你根据以下提示，给你中学的英语老师罗老师写一封感谢信，表达对老师的喜爱和尊敬．
1．回顾在校学习时的情况和感受；
2．具体描述罗老师给予自己的帮助；
3．对罗老师的感谢和祝愿．
注意：1词数不少于100； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Ms．Luo，
I am very excited to write to express my thanks to you．I am now a freshman of Guangxi University，                    

Answer 1

分析 本书面表达是要求学生写一封书信，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的．考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，首先写现在的状况，所以要用一般现在时．回忆过去的状况和老师的教诲，用一般过去时态．要求让你给英语老师李老师写信，因此本文必须用第一人称．再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次．
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be excited to，express sth．to sb．，at one time，be tired of，do one's best，have the chance to do，realize one's dream，hear from，还运用了wish引导的虚拟语气和which、when引导的定语从句等等．并注意了句子的衔接如：because of，however，等等．

解答 Dear Mr．Luo，
        I'm very excited to write to express my thanks to you．I am now a freshman of Nanjin University，which I have been dreaming about．（高分句型一）Mr．Li，I still remember the days when you taught me English．My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work．However，at one time，the pressure of examinations，too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed．（高分句型二）I was tired of the warning that if I didn't do my best．I wouldn't have the chance to go to college．Thanks for your encouragement； if not，I wouldn't have realized my dream．And now I really understand you．I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges．（高分句型三）Are you still so busy？How I miss you!
    Hoping to hear from you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．