根据提供的材料写一篇短文: 时间:2013年3月10日上午11时左右地点:郑州市89路公交车上事件:一个60多岁的老头上公交车后走到一位女孩旁边站着.司机就在车内播放了“为老人让座的提示音.几站过后依然无人让座.老人便对这名女孩说“我这么大年纪.你就不给我让个位? . 女孩回答“我没有看见啊 .两人随后发生口角.老人在快下车时将女� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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根据提供的材料写一篇短文：

时间：2013年3月10日上午11时左右

地点：郑州市89路公交车上

事件:一个60多岁的老头上公交车后走到一位女孩旁边站着，司机就在车内播放了“为老人让座”的提示音，几站过后依然无人让座。老人便对这名女孩说“我这么大年纪，你就不给我让个位？”。女孩回答“我没有看见啊”。两人随后发生口角，老人在快下车时将女孩打了一顿，扬长而去。

要求：1. 用三、四句话概括此事件；

2.你对此事的看法：

3. 120字左右

参考词汇：道德谴责moral condemnation 法律责任legal responsibility

美德virtue 良知conscience

【答案】

不唯一

As was reported, March 10, 2013 saw a quarrel breaking out between an old man over 60 and a girl on a bus in Zhengzhou city. The reason was that the girl failed to give seat to him even after being hinted. What’s worse, the old man beat the girl in the end.

The incident indicates that some people’s morals are, to some extent, declining rapidly currently. On the one hand, the girl might be condemned for her indifference to the old man. It’s great virtue in China for the young to give seat to those who need it badly, such as the senior citizens, the disabled. On the other hand, the old man should take legal responsibility for his rude behavior. After all those underprivileged, even if not helped, are supposed to show forgiveness and gratitude.

In short, it’s everyone’s duty to improve social moral level, which is essential to create a harmonious society.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的题材内容贴近学生生活，给出的要点表述较全，题的难度较小，考生应注意几点：1.考生在写作时对所对故事概括陈述，适当发挥，不要逐条翻译。2.注意句子的时态。3.注意人称。应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

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概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
Dear Li Ping,
I’m glad that you trust me so much and tell me your true feeling, now I’ve read an article which says that
_____________________________________________________________________With the best wishes!
Yours truly，
Wang Yan

根据提供的材料写一篇短文：
时间：2013年3月10日上午11时左右
地点：郑州市89路公交车上
事件:一个60多岁的老头上公交车后走到一位女孩旁边站着，司机就在车内播放了“为老人让座”的提示音，几站过后依然无人让座。老人便对这名女孩说“我这么大年纪，你就不给我让个位？”。女孩回答“我没有看见啊”。两人随后发生口角，老人在快下车时将女孩打了一顿，扬长而去。
要求：1. 用三、四句话概括此事件；
2.你对此事的看法：
3. 120字左右
参考词汇：道德谴责moral condemnation 法律责任legal responsibility
美德virtue 良知conscience

第二节读写任务(共l小题，满分25分)

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Friendship with oneself is all important, because without it one cannot be friends with anyone else in the world.

We often focus on building relationships with others that we forget the essential first step: being friends of ourselves. That is the crucial first step if we are to have good relationships with others. How can we have good relationships with others if we don’t even have good relationship with ourselves?

Here are some tips:

1. Forgive yourself

You may have made those mistakes in the past, but is there anything you can do about them? I don’t think so, except learning from them. It’s true that you are not perfect, but neither is everybody else. It’s normal to make mistakes, so do yourself a favor by giving yourself forgiveness.

2. Focus on your strengths

Instead of focusing on your weaknesses, focus on your strengths. You always have some strengths which give you a unique combination nobody else have. Recognize your strengths and build your life around them.

3. Stop comparing yourself with others

You are unique. You can never be like other people, and neither can other people be like you. The way you measure your success is not determined by other people and what they achieve. Instead, it is determined by your own life purpose. You have everything you need to achieve your life purpose, so it’s useless to compare yourself with others.

[写作内容]

假设你的同学总觉得自己学习不如别人，因而产生自卑心理，请你写根据上面所提供的材料写一篇短文,用E-mail 发给他(她)：

1．以约30个词概括文章大意，说明首先要对善待自己的观点；

2．以约120个词表达你对他(她)的建议和希望，并包括如下要点：

(1) 分析他(她) 产生自卑心理的原因；

(2) 找出他(她)的优势；

(3) 提出合理建议。

[写作要求] 1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．文章开头和结尾已写好。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

Dear Li Ping,

I’m glad that you trust me so much and tell me your true feeling, now I’ve read an article which says that

_____________________________________________________________________With the best wishes!

Yours truly，

Wang Yan