Question

假如你的名字叫张勇，你的美国笔友John想了解你进入高中后的英语课外阅读情况。请你根据下面提示，给他回一封电子邮件。

阅读现状	1. 以英文报纸为主； 2. 偶尔简单的故事书……； 3. 几乎没有经典类的英语读物
原因分析	1. 阅读时间少； 2. 没有养成阅读英语的习惯； 3. 词汇量小，认为经典类太难，没有尝试或不感兴趣……
未来打算	……

 

注意：

1. 根据所给提示，适当发挥，要求内容充实，语意连贯。

2. 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

英语课外阅读：English extracurricular reading；

经典英语读物：classic English books.

Dear John,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about my English reading in senior high school.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Yong

 

Answer 1

Dear John,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about my English extracurricular reading in senior high school. Usually I am only asked to read some newspapers. Sometimes I just read some simple English stories or magazines to relax myself. But I have never read classic English books.

Do you know why? The reasons are as follows. First, since entering senior high school, I have been burdened with so much homework that my reading time is very limited. Besides, I haven’t formed a habit of reading English. Lastly, the number of the English words I have mastered is less than 3000. I think the classic English books are too difficult to understand and so I even haven’t had a try.

However, reading is important for our English learning. It can not only enlarge our English vocabulary but show us a colorful world. Especially it helps us to think better in English and learn English better. So I decide to read English widely, ranging from simple English stories to classic English books.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Yong

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给的提示给笔友John写一封电子邮件，告诉他你在高中的英语课外阅读情况。 写作要点包括：阅读形状、原因分析、未来打算三个方面，要求根据提示适当拓展，使内容充实、语意连贯；词数在150词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意使用参考词汇。

亮点说明：

范文使用了较多的频度副词usually, sometimes, never等来表示事情发生的频率，强调自己的阅读量不多，也使句意变得连贯；

范文使用but, and, so, First,Besides, Lastly, However等衔接句子和段落，使作文显得联系紧密、行文流畅；

范文使用了结果状语从句so much homework that my reading time is very limited；现在完成时的被动语态have been burdened with...；宾语从句the classic English books are too difficult to understand；固定句型 too difficult to understand等语法知识，使作文句式多样，避免了句式单一；

范文使用了较多的固定搭配和固定短语：be burdened with, formed a habit of, too ...to, not only...but, ranging from...to等，使作文句子结构多样化，表达更生动；

范文还使用了一些高级词汇：burden, limited, enlarge, especially, widely等，使作文的写作水平得到了提升。

考点：书信类作文