Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊 “英语园地”写一篇短文，讲述你在这个寒假居家自主学习的过程。 注意：词数不少于 60。

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Answer 1

【答案】I spent an unforgettable winter vacation this year, during which I became an autonomous learner.

At the beginning of the vacation, I made a detailed learning plan. I first listed the learning tasks for the following days and then made plans in great details to ensure that they are practical and feasible. Then I started learning as scheduled. With the learning materials piled on my desk, I was always in high spirit every day. To my delight, I could carry out the plan strictly.

Whenever I met with difficulties, I turned to my teachers and classmates for help through the Internet. Thanks to the convenient video chat app, I could get my problems solved in time, which guaranteed my learning in a right and smooth way. At the end of the vacation, I had a systematic revision of previous lessons, and gained more confidence in weak subjects. My parents also took notice of my progress and gave me a thumb up for my self-discipline.

I had a great sense of accomplishment because my autonomous learning ability was cultivated, which I believe will have a far-reaching influence on me.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据所给的图画内容为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，讲述自己在这个寒假居家自主学习的过程。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 定制详细的学习计划。（make a detailed learning plan）

2. 介绍学习渠道。（introduce the ways of study）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

at the beginning of; in great details; in high spirit; to my delight; carry out; meet with difficulties; gave me a thumb up for; have a great sense of

第三步：连词成句

1. I spent an unforgettable winter vacation this year, during which I became an autonomous learner.

2. At the beginning of the vacation, I made a detailed learning plan.

3. I first listed the learning tasks for the following days and then made plans in great details to ensure that they are practical and feasible.

4. Then I started learning as scheduled.

5. With the learning materials piled on my desk, I was always in high spirit every day.

6. To my delight, I could carry out the plan strictly.

7. Whenever I met with difficulties, I turned to my teachers and classmates for help through the Internet.

8. Thanks to the convenient video chat app, I could get my problems solved in time, which guaranteed my learning in a right and smooth way.

9. At the end of the vacation, I had a systematic revision of previous lessons, and gained more confidence in weak subjects.

10. My parents also took notice of my progress and gave me a thumb up for my self-discipline.

11. I had a great sense of accomplishment because my autonomous learning ability was cultivated, which I believe will have a far-reaching influence on me.

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

第五步：润色修改