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16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
 Dear Peter，
       I'm very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with．
       Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own．Apart from the convenient public transportation，our private car will make your visits difficult．Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities，I'm sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．Above all，they hosted the American student last year，through that they gained lots of experience．In addition，the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
Hope you enjoy your stay here．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 这是一封书信，讲述了作者为一名即将到来的留学生介绍要寄宿的这个家庭的基本情况，从住，行，吃等各个方面做了详细的解释．

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged∧you to stay with．
                                                                                                                                               加for
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own．
Located                                                                          is
Apart from the convenient public transportation，our private car will make your visits difficult．
                                                                         their                                                easy
Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities，
                                                             fluent
I'm sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．
                                                去掉或加in
Above all，they hosted the American student last year，through that they gained lots of experience．
                                   an                                                        which
In addition，the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
                         hostess's
Hope you enjoy your stay here．
Yours，
Li Hua．
1．加for．短语搭配，arrange sth for sb替某人安排某事．
2．Locating改为Located．短语搭配，be located in坐落在某地，作状语时，be动词可以省略．
3．was改为is．文章讲述的现在的情况，要用一般现在时态．
4．our改为their．逻辑指代错误，句意表达的是the host family他们的私家车．
5．difficult改为easy．逻辑错误，句意表达的是除了便捷公共交通工具，主人家还有私家车，可以让你的出行更方便．
6．fluently改为fluent．修饰名词English要用形容词．
7．to去掉或加in．短语搭配，have no trouble in doing sth做某事没困难，in可以省略．
8．the改为an．句意表示的是泛指，要用不定冠词，American是元音开头的，要用an．
9．that改为which．题干是一个非限制性定语从句，介词后指物的要用关系代词which．
10．hostess改为hostess's．句意表达的是女主人的厨艺，要用名词所有格表示．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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