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9.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出增加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
          2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school.In the past two and a half years,our school had organized many activities.What impressed me best was an activity called"Learning to Farm".In an autumn afternoon,we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes.Having been in the city for so a long time,we were so happy to go to the countryside.After divided into three groups,we started to work.Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes,and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole,put the earth back and pushed them down hard.We continued doing that until all the work was done.Although we were exhausted,but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.

分析 作者在本文讲述了自己在学校印象最深刻的一次活动,在这次活动中作者和同学们学习种土豆.同学们被分成三组,有的切土豆,有的挖坑,还有的埋土豆.作者和同学们一直干完,尽管很累,但非常满足.

解答 Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school.
                         the
In the past two and a half years,our school had organized
                                                                 has     
many activities.What impressed me best was an activity called
                                                      most
"Learning to Farm".In an autumn afternoon,we were sent to a
                              On
farm whichwe learned to plant potatoes.Having been in the city
       where
for so a long time,we were so happy to go to the countryside.

After∧divided into three groups,we started to work.Some students
       being
cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes,and the others put the

pieces of potatoes into the hole,put the earth back and pushed them
                                       holes                                                 it
down hard.We continued doing that until all the work was done.

Although we were exhausted,but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.
                                          去掉but
1.a改为the;考查冠词,序数词third前面要加定冠词the.
2.had 改为has;考查动词的时态,根据时间状语  In the past two and a half years可知,此处应用现在完成时.
3.best 改为most;考查副词,结合上下文分析句意为"使我印象最深的是学习干农活",故用副词much的最高级most.
4.In 改为On;考查介词,具体到在某一天的上文或下午 时要用介词on.
5.which改为where;考查定语从句,分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词为a farm,所以用关系副词where引导.
6.so 改为such;so为副词,修饰形容词或副词,such为形容词,修饰名词,这里a long time是名词性短语,故用such.
7.divided前加being;考查动词的语态,分析句子结构,暗含主语是"we",与动词divide是被动关系,所以divided的前面加being,表示被动.
8.hole 改为holes;考查名词;结合上下文分析,有的同学把切开的土豆放进挖的坑里面,前面的hole用了复数形式,这里也应该用复数形式.
9.them改为it;考查代词,这里需要指代的是 the earth,为不可数名词,故用it.
10.去掉but;考查连词,although不能与but连用,故去掉but.

点评 短文改错当中,首先要从整体掌握短文大意,结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识,习惯用法,短语搭配等对短文进行分析,以便找出文中的错误所在,并加以修正.

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