Question

【题目】书面表达

随着中国经济的发展，出国旅游成为一种潮流，但游客中也出现了许多有损国人形象的不和谐现象。假如你是李华，一名导游。为了提升你所带旅游团成员的素质，请给团员写一封信，向他们简要描述一些不和谐现象，并在言行、守法、尊重风俗、安全等方面提出几点文明出游的建议。

要求：① 100词左右；

② 可适当增加内容，使行文连贯流畅。

Dear Sir or Madam,

A growing number of people prefer to spend their holidays abroad. _____________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

A growing number of people prefer to spend their holidays abroad. However, what some of us say and do on the journey annoys the local residents. For example, some laugh at others’ appearance only because they look different. So I am writing to remind you of some advice on our behavior.

Above all, it’s important that we should mind our behavior when using some public transport services, especially on a flight or a train. As everyone know, it’s natural that we should obey the law of the destination. Besides, whenever we find something different, please don’t feel strange since they have their own customs and religious beliefs. Last but not least, keep a close eye on our belongings and we will be able to avoid unnecessary troubles.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

作文分析：本文是一篇建议性的作文，讲述了人们在国外度假期间的不文明的现象，以及对此提出的建议。根据提纲要求向他们简要描述一些不和谐现象，并在言行、守法、尊重风俗、安全等方面提出几点文明出游的建议。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】

what some of us say，这是一句宾语从句，what引导的宾语从句，并且采用了倒装形式。it’s important that we should mind our behavior when using some public transport services，这句话中运用到了It be句型和when引导的时间状语从句。同时文中运用了诸多亮彩的短语，比如：A growing number of，laugh at，Above all，As everyone know等等。同时文章结构鲜明，首段概述了不文明的现象，第二段分三句话来提建议，分别运用恰当的连接词，进行串联，时整篇文章结构鲜明，条理清楚。