题目内容
【题目】书面表达
暑期马上到了,有些高中生打算利用假期做兼职工作,对此人们有不同的看法。请用英语写一篇100词左右的文章,发表你对这个现象的看法。
要点:
1、中学生兼职的优点(1.赚零花钱;2.提高交际能力;3.获取社会经验)
2、中学生兼职的缺点(1.影响学习;2.引发安全问题;3.引起父母担忧)
3、你的看法
注意:1. 根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当展开;
2. 词数100左右。 参考词汇:现象:phenomenon
More and more high school students go to find part-time jobs during summer vacation.
【答案】
One Possible Version
More and more high school students go to find part-time jobs during summer vacation. People have different opinions about this phenomenon.
Some people hold that taking a part-time job has advantages. It can help students make some pocket money to meet their daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. And it can improve their social communication skills. They can build up new friendship and gain working experience as well, which is helpful to their growth.
However, other people think it still has some disadvantages. If a student spends too much time doing part-time job, he or she will certainly fail to concentrate on study. Some students may be cheated or hurt by their employers, because they don't know how to protect themselves. Besides, their early contact with society adds greater worries to their parents.
【解析】
试题分析:
本文要求写一篇短文,介绍人们对高中生利用暑假做兼职工作的看法。写作时注意以下几点:1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用现在时,用第三人称。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色,如 宾语从句Some people hold that taking a part-time job has advantages. 和other people think it still has some disadvantages.;which引导非限制性定语从句﹍﹍,which is helpful to their growth.;固定用法spends too much time doing part-time job花太多时间做兼职,concentrate on study专注学习,which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study;还有However,Besides,等有效地使文章及语句间连接紧凑。