Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的班级打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，有三种活动方案供大家选择：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对。

请你选择其中一个方案，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由。你的写作中必须包括：

1．选择方案，并对该方案提出建议；

2．谈谈你提出建议的理由。

开头已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：慈善：charity（n．）

Our class is planning to organize a class activity during winter vacation．

Answer 1

【答案】One Possible Student Version Our class is planning to organize a class activity during winter vacation. The winter vocation is around the corner. And I have a preference for holding a charity sale during this vocation, the reasons for which lie in the following aspects. First of all, the money earned in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need. This will not only help them through difficulties, but also give them warmness and happiness. Moreover, it will also benefit us a lot. For instance, we will grasp the significance of being considerate and thoughtful. Besides, giving others a hand also makes us delightful. In a word, it is good for us to hold the charity sale for it can help those in want of help and do benefits to our personal development.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，由题中给出的要求写一篇作文，作文包括三种方案：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对。请你选择其中一个方案，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由。写作中必须包括： 1．选择方案，并对该方案提出建议； 2．谈谈你提出建议的理由。

【亮点说明】：文章用题中给的方案选出了合理的，并且说出了自己的理由。文章用了moreover,besides,for instance等高级词汇，使文章衔接的自然，不生硬。用了以第三人称为主的描写，并不是单纯以自我为中心描写，所以文章流畅，有可读性。