题目内容
14.外国中学生Amy第一次来上海,由你陪同她参观.请你挑选一个具体的地方,将此次陪同的设想写成短文.短文应包含以下信息:1描述你打算带她去的那个地方.
2阐述你挑选那个地方的理由.
●参考词语:
Oriental TV Tower;
the Bund;
Shanghai Museum;
Yu Garden;
a …market/fair;
a …community/school/home
…
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们陪同第一次来上海的外国中学生Amy参观一个具体的地方,将此次陪同的设想写成短文.这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般将来时,内容要点包括:陪同第一次来上海的外国中学生Amy参观一个具体的地方.描述你打算带她去的那个地方.阐述你挑选那个地方的理由.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为描述你打算带她去的那个地方.第二部分为阐述你挑选那个地方的理由.
重点短语与句型:
The Oriental Pearl TV Tower东方明珠塔
is also known as 作为…而出名
is located in 位于
The tower,surrounded by the Yangpu Bridge in the northeast and the Nanpu Bridge in the southwest,creates a picture of'twin dragons playing with pearls此句用了过去分词surrounded作后置定语,修饰the tower.
The tower creates a picture of twin dragons playing with pearls.此句用了动名词playing作介词of的宾语,动名词前加了自己的逻辑主语 twin dragons.
解答 The Oriental Pearl TV Tower,is also known as the Oriental Pearl,is a TV tower in Shanghai,China.The Oriental Pearl TV Tower is located in Pudong Park in Lujiazui District,Shanghai.Oriental Pearl TV Tower is Shanghai Modern Architectural Design (Group) Co.,Ltd.Jiang Huan into the design.Construction started in 1991,completed in 1994,a total investment of 8.3 billion yuan.467.9 meters high,in Asia,it is the world's third tower,behind Canada,Canada's National Tower (553.3 meters),and Russia's Ostankino Tower (540.1 meters).The tower,surrounded 过去分词作后置定语by the Yangpu Bridge in the northeast and the Nanpu Bridge in the southwest,creates a picture of'twin dragons playing with pearls'(双龙戏珠).打算带她去参观东方明珠塔
The entire scene is a photographic jewel that excites the imagination and attracts thousands of visitors year-round.The tower is one of Shanghai's landmarks. 参观东方电视塔理由
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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