Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的笔友Jack 发来电子邮件，询问你所在城市的环境如何，在日常生活中你的一些习惯是否污染了环境，以及你可以为环境保护做些什么。请你用英文给Jack 回一封邮件。

注意：

1. 词数120-150左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。

提示词：环境-environment 污染-pollution 二氧化碳-Carbon dioxide

Dear Jack,

Glad to hear from you._________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version

Dear Jack,

Glad to hear from you. Now I’d like to tell you something about the environment of our city. Compared with the past few years, the environment of this city is getting worse. For example, the air is not as fresh as before. Rivers are so dirty that we often see dead fish floating on the surface of the water.

I feel ashamed of myself for having done many things that harm the environment. I have been asking my father to drive me to and from school, producing much carbon dioxide. Besides, I often litter on the sidewalks. From now on, I will change my lifestyle and take action to protect the environment. I will no longer use one-off things and replace plastic bags with paper bags. I will put empty cans, bottles and waste paper into dustbin in order that they can be recycled. When going out, I will ride a bike or choose public transportation.

Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it. Only by saving the environment can we save ourselves.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】李华的笔友Jack 发来电子邮件，询问你所在城市的环境如何，在日常生活中你的一些习惯是否污染了环境，以及你可以为环境保护做些什么。请用英文给Jack 回一封邮件。文章以第一人称为主，时态涉及一般现在时和一般将来时。内容主要分三部分：首先表明写信的目的及总体的环境情况；然后重点写自己的习惯对环境的影响及为保护环境应该采取的措施；最后呼吁每个人保护环境。

写作时要注意要点全面，条理清楚，观点明确，表达准确。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用为文章增加亮点，如过去分词Compared with the past few years,同级比较not as fresh as before. so…that句型，现在分词producing much carbon dioxide.倒装句Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it. Only by saving the environment can we save ourselves.词语feel ashamed of, From now on, get along well with等。