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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.

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【答案】When I first learned to write in English, I into many difficulties. The main problem was in\ that I always thought in Chinese tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her .Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy to myself on paper as I was learning to express in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was good one. I was encouraged by their words.

【解析】试题分析：本文是关于学英语的故事。

【1】run→ran 讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时态，故把run改为ran。

【2】去掉in in不与that连用，that引导表语从句。故去掉in。

【3】Chinese→English 我总是用汉语思考而且尽量把一切翻译成汉语。故把Chinese改为English。

【4】advices→advice advice是不可数名词，故把advices改成advice。

【5】talk→talking enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事。故把talk改为talking。

【6】me→myself express oneself表达自我。

【7】showed后加it “给某人看……”应用show sth to sb。代词it 放在showed和to 中间。

【8】very→so so...that...如此……以致于……，引导结果状语从句，故把very改为so。

【9】the→a 句意：每个人说这是一个好故事。故把the改为a。

【10】great→greatly 副词修饰动词，故把great改为greatly。

【知识拓展】

1.动词或动词词组后面用动名词作宾语

enjoy；finish；avoid；be fond of ；give up ；look forward to； get down to； devote---to---； be used to (习惯) ；spend---(in) doing sth.； object to 。

2.mean doing意味着做某事， mean to do打算做某事； regret doing后悔曾经做过某事，regret to do遗憾地去做某事； try doing 尝试做某事，try to do努力去做某事； forget doing 忘记曾做过某事，forget to do 忘记要去做某事；remember doing记得曾经做过某事， remember to do记得要去做某事。

【学法指导】

such…that作“如此…以致”解,连接一个表示结果的状语从句.与so…that

意思相同,但用法不同.如：so…that这一结构中,so后边可加形容词或副词,

而such后边要用名词（这个名词前面可以带形容词,也可以不带）.因此,

such…that的句型结构可分以下三种：

1) such＋a(an)＋adj.＋单数可数名词＋that…clause

He is such a clever boy that everybody likes him.他非常聪明,大家都非常喜欢他.

He was such an honest man that he was praised by the teacher.他非常诚实,因而受到了老师的表扬.

2)such＋adj.＋复数可数名词＋that…clause

They are such interesting novels that I want to read them once again.这些小说非常有趣,我想再读一遍.

3)such＋adj.＋不可数名词＋that…clause

He has made such great progress that the teachers are pleased with him.他进步得很快,老师们对他感到很满意.

注意：如果such后边的名词前由many、much、few、little等词所修饰的话,则不用

such而用so.例如：

He had so many falls that he was black and blue all over.他摔了很多跤,以致于全身上下青一块,紫一块的.

He had so little education that he was unfit for this job.他所受教育很少,不适合做这个工作.

There were so many people in the street watching the fire that firefighters could not get close tothe building.街上有那么多人观看大火,以致于消防队员无法接近大楼.