Question

【题目】随着社会的发展，家庭收入的提高，中学生有了更多的零用钱。于是很多同学开始大手大脚花钱，如购买过多零食和各种电子产品，消费品牌衣物，甚至相互攀比。对此你有何看法？请根据以上内容提示写一篇英语短文。

注意： 1. 词数要求：120—150词 2. 参考词汇：挥霍 splash

Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of society, the family income is on the increase, and the students have more pocket money.

But as you see, some students spend money as water. As a result, too much snacks can often be found in a bad effect on their learning. Besides, many students have more electronic products, such as MP4, mobile phones and so on. Of course, this makes their lives corlorful and various, but to a great extent, their normal study can also be affected. What’s more, more students count for famous brands of the clothes and shoes. Even worse, many students often compare themselves with higher in consuming, which, I think, not only wastes too much money, but also is bad for the growth of the students.

Obviously, I am against splashing money. To earn the bread, they work hard day and night, so we must not waste money.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，随着社会的发展，家庭收入的提高，中学生有了更多的零用钱。于是很多同学开始大手大脚花钱，如购买过多零食和各种电子产品，消费品牌衣物，甚至相互攀比。对此你有何看法？请根据以上内容提示写一篇英语短文。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称。120～150词，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。作文打分重点关注文体，篇章结构，语言表达的连贯性和地道性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：as you see 引导的定语从句，effect on 、to a great extent 、which, 引导的非限制性定语从句等都很不错。