题目内容
1.第24届冬季运动会将于2022年2月在北京和张家口市联合举行,现面向社会招募志愿者.假如你是李华,请根据自己的情况写一封100词左右的英文申请信.内容包括:1.热爱体育;
2.英语流利;
3.性格外向开朗,有组织能力.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,写一封100词左右的英文申请信.写作要点包括:1.热爱体育;2.英语流利;3.性格外向开朗,有组织能力.写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主.
重点词汇:apply to (申请);volunteer(志愿者);in one's spare time(在某人的业余时间);so…that (如此…以至于);devote to (致力于,投身于);meanwhile(同时);not only…
but also (不但…而且);take into account(考虑,重视).
高分句型:1.Besides,①with a very good command of English,I can speak the language fluently,②which makes me more qualified to help foreigners.
①介词短语在句中作状语;②which引导一个非限制性定语从句,关系代词which指代I can speak the language fluently这件事.
2.Meanwhile,①not only do I have the ability to organize activities,but also I am outgoing and energetic,②which benefits me in communicating with strangers.
①not only…but also若连接两个句子,not only后面的句子要用倒装;②which引导一个非限制性定语从句.
解答 Dir Sir/Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.
I am Li Hua,an 18-year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time.I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game.Besides,with a very good command of English,I can speak the language fluently,which makes me more qualified to help foreigners(高分句型一).Meanwhile,not only do I have the ability to organize activities,but also I am outgoing and energetic,which benefits me in communicating with strangers(高分句型二).Everything taken into account,I think I am a good fit for the position.I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全,关键短语和句型要写对,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,还要注意人称和时态使用要正确.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.

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