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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Every boy and every girl are eager for success. But what can we succeed in life? Here are my opinions:

First, we must be friendly and kindly. It allows us to make friends but survive wherever we are. Second, we must set a goal, which motivates us to pursue our dreams. Third, it’s better to believe in us. Only with self-confidence we realize our goals. Fourth, we should develop good characters, such as a strong will and diligence, because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble.

As far as I’m concerning, success belongs to those who keep on trying. So let’s take actions now!

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B. visit HSBC by yourself

C. make a call to a leader of HSBC

D. submit online application before the deadline

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C. To become a future leader of their branches or contact centres, you’d better join Retail

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How Can I Fight Laziness?

Lazy people will never amount to anything in life. However, laziness can be defeated once a few changes have been made in your mind.

1.. Many people lack sleep constantly, since they stay up too late and get up too early to prepare for work. These people have little motivation once they arrive home. Laziness works hand in hand with a lack of motivation and a tendency to put off things. By adjusting your sleep schedule to provide a few more hours of meaningful rest, you can fight laziness throughout the day.

Another way to fight laziness is to change your mind from passive to active. Some people treat their lives as if they were pushed from task to task. Others take a more proactive(主动的) approach, viewing each task as a challenge they must overcome alone. 2.

Some people fight laziness by removing the temptations(诱惑) that surround them. A television in the living room may provide entertainment, but watching too much TV often contributes to laziness. 3.Complete a few tasks and reward yourself with what you enjoy, such as a good dinner or a film.

Laziness can also be a lasting problem at home. Couples and children may all have different energy levels, but laziness can be spread if not dealt with immediately. 4. Be the first to collect and wash dishes after a meal. Others in the home may eventually follow your example and perform their own task. It is difficult to practice laziness when you are surrounded by motivated people.

5. Enough exercise and a balanced diet can help you to develop a healthy lifestyle, thus enabling you to have more energy and help lift your spirits.

A.To fight family laziness, set an example.

B.One way to fight laziness is to get enough sleep.

C.Knowing how to fight laziness is important.

D.Finally, taking exercise regularly can help you fight laziness.

E. With strong determination, you will be able to achieve your goal.

F. Create a reward system for yourself, just as parents do for a child.

G. Laziness sets in when you no longer feel in charge of your own life.

Museum fans with limited time should consider a visit to Ueno Park where a variety of first class museums are concentrated closely together, including the impressive Tokyo National Museum, the National Museum of Western Art, the Tokyo Metropolitan Art Museum, the National Science Museum and Ueno Zoo along with some smaller museums.

Museums in Tokyo are typically closed on one day of the week (usually Mondays) and during the New Year holidays (typically December 29 to January 4). If the regular weekly closing day falls on a national holiday, most museums will open on the holiday and close the next day instead.

Some museums have extended hours on certain days (typically Fridays), and some offer free entrance to selected exhibitions or on certain days of the month. Most museums allow entry until 30 minutes before closing time.

Tokyo National Museum

Hours: 9:30 to 17:00 (extended hours on some Fridays and weekends)

Closed: Mondays (or following day if Monday is a holiday), New Year holidays

Admission: 600 yen

As the oldest and largest museum in Japan, it is made up of five buildings, each like a separate museum in itself. They house the largest collection of national treasures and important cultural items in the country.

National Museum of Western Art

Hours: 9:30 to 17:30 (until 17:00 in winter, until 20:00 on Fridays)

Closed: Mondays (or following day if Monday is a holiday), Dec 28 to Jan 1

Admission: 420 yen, special exhibitions extra

This museum displays western art, primarily by European artists. There is no permanent gallery and the rotating (轮流的) exhibits are mostly from the museum’s collection. Admission is free on the 2nd and 4th Saturdays of each month.

Tokyo Metropolitan Art Museum

Hours: 9:30 to 17:30 (until 20:00 on Fridays)

Closed: First and third Monday of each month, New Year holidays

Admission: Varies by exhibition

Reopened in April 2012, this museum displays all types of art in its six galleries. There is no permanent collection, but there are multiple temporary exhibitions by various art groups.

National Science Museum

Hours: 9:00 to 17:00 (until 20:00 on Fridays)

Closed: Mondays (or following day if Monday is a holiday), Dec 28 to Jan 1

Admission: 600 yen

This museum covers both science and natural history with hands-on physics and robotics experiments and a 360 degree virtual theater relocated from the Aichi Expo.

1.Visitors are advised to go to Ueno Park mainly because ________.

A. there are many great museums there

B. it has one of the best parks in Japan

C. it is a landmark building in Tokyo

D. it is free of charge throughout the year

2.We can learn from the text that the Tokyo National Museum ________.

A. is the oldest and largest museum in Asia

B. has the largest collection of artwork in Japan

C. has a 360 degree virtual theater

D. is full of Japan’s national treasures

3.According to the text, you can visit the ________ for free on certain days.

A. Tokyo National Museum

B. National Museum of Western Art

C. Tokyo Metropolitan Art Museum

D. National Science Museum

4.The passage is most likely taken from ________.

A. a tourist guide

B. a geographic report

C. a travel journal

D. a science textbook

As a child, I started learning to play the piano, my favorite musical ________, but I was forced to give up when I started my middle school ________ I could concentrate more on my studies.

It’s one of my biggest ________ to stop practicing the piano when I recall sadly today. During the following years, I kept telling my piano teacher that I would ________. However, I didn’t keep my promise because I was ________ with my study. ________ I lost touch with my teacher. Some years later, my teacher died. I was very sad because I lost such a good teacher. She was a very warm and gentle person. It hurts me to think she may have been ________ that I never returned. I haven’t taken lessons since then but to be honest, I ________ to. Sitting at the piano, I couldn’t help recalling many ________ — times of my practising at home and playing before my teacher and one time my teacher ________ me after I played entire pieces of music wrong in front of her colleagues. I was so ________ that I could hardly say anything. But her ________ helped me ease my shame. These memories, ________, good or bad, never caused my ________ for playing the piano again.

This thought then led me to think that ________ is like music, and that we all try to play different ________ in the instrument of our life. Sometimes the pitch(音高) is ________ when we play it well, but sometimes we are out of tone. However, we all continue to create our own ________ style of music. No matter what style our music is, it is ________ that we sing the songs of joy, quietness and love. Though I may never make it back to piano lessons, it doesn’t ________ that I’ve stopped making music.

1.A. instrumentB. performanceC. roomD. stage

2.A. in thatB. so thatC. now thatD. except that

3.A. successesB. regretsC. decisionsD. hobbies

4.A. playB. graduateC. leaveD. return

5.A. occupiedB. angryC. satisfiedD. patient

6.A. ActuallyB. ConstantlyC. SuddenlyD. Gradually

7.A. astonishedB. gladC. disappointedD. amazed

8.A. likedB. neededC. wantedD. decided

9.A. dreamsB. expressionsC. wordsD. memories

10.A. instructedB. hurtC. punishedD. respected

11.A. frightenedB. movedC. embarrassedD. excited

12.A. happinessB. satisfactionC. comfortD. sigh

13.A. insteadB. meanwhileC. thereforeD. however

14.A. hopeB. courageC. feelingD. effect

15.A. lifeB. learningC. attitudeD. enjoyment

16.A. cardsB. sportsC. rolesD. games

17.A. hardB. wonderfulC. surprisingD. complex

18.A. uniqueB. boringC. commonD. similar

19.A. necessaryB. strangeC. possibleD. important

20.A. matterB. meanC. reportD. appear

根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项,选项中有两项为多余选项。

The holiday season isn’t just about shopping and gifts.___ 1.____ However, holiday travel can be more expensive than the gifts. Fortunately, the following tips will help keep your travel spending under control.

● Plan ahead. The earlier you book your travel, from airfare to hotels, the easier it is to find good deals. ____2.___Your best prices on airfare come when you book three weeks before the plane leaves for domestic flights. For international flights, consider booking 30 days in advance. Many experts point out that you should book travel between one month and three months out for high-traffic holidays.

● Book your air travel on cheaper days. Traveling by air on Tuesdays and Wednesdays often costs less than traveling on Fridays and Sundays. During the holidays, it is not just about a specific day of the week. You also need to consider the days surrounding the holiday but days immediately before and after a holiday can be expensive. One of the best ways to save is to plan your air travel on the Day of the holiday.____ 3.____

● Consider traveling overnight. Red-eye flights and overnight flights often cost less than those at more convenient times.______ 4.____Traveling overnight can help you avoid a night in the hotel, as well as save your money on travel to your destination.

●____5._____ You can’t bring liquids with you on the airline, but you can bring sandwiches and other snacks. When you are on the road, you can buy food at local groceries to make your own meals. If you are staying in a hotel long-term, consider cooking your own food, especially if you have access to a microwave.

A. Bring your own food.

B. Consider affordable accommodations.

C. Traveling by plane is not the best choice.

D. Plus, booking earlier can save you money.

E. For instance, traveling on Christmas Day might be a great deal.

F. A great deal of travel also takes place during this time of year.

G. Other alternatives include sleeper trains, as well as overnight ferries.

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