Question

第一节：基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

智能手机（smart-phone）的使用现在已经非常普遍了，尤其是在年轻人当中。它在给我们带来方便的同时，也带来了一些问题：

1、网络聊天使得人与人之间缺乏面对面的交流，造成人际交往困难；   3、青少年沉迷于网络游戏，导致睡眠质量差，上课睡觉，并影响身体健康；   4、学生甚至做作业也依赖智能手机，不愿自己独立思考。   5、你的观点……

【写作内容】

1.智能手机带来的问题；

2.你的观点。

【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。文章开头已给出

The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems.________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems. First of all, people are occupied in chatting online and it will be difficult for them to communicate with others in real life. Besaides, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in them suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health. Last but not least, some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for answers rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework.. In my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly, instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见短语are occupied in忙于做某事；communicate with与某人交流；are addicted to沉溺于；resulting in导致；does great harm to对。。有害；search for寻找；some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in them suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health.这个句子which 引导非限制性定语从句。Last but not least, some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for answers rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework.这个句子中运用到prefer to do rather than do 宁愿做某事也不愿。。

考点： 提纲类作文