Question

8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的单词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下面画一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的单词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
With the national college entrance examination approach，many students are so worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness．It's a fairly common phenomena among us students．Here is some effective methods for you to adopt．
First of all，you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test．Secondly，it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions．I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress．Last but not least，you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind．Follow my tips，but you will overcome your exam anxiety．

Answer 1

分析 这篇短文是作者给即将参加高考的同学的一些建议．高考临近，很多同学紧张地晚上睡不着觉，有的甚至得了精神疾病，
作者认为考试前要做好成分的准备，当感到紧张时可以通过深呼吸来放松自己，还有就是要相信自己，保持一个良好的状态，
这样的话就能顺利通过考试的．

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fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness．It's a fairly common phenomena among us students．
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Here issome effective methods for you to adopt．First of all，you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test．
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Secondly，itis no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions．I think take a deep breath is a helpful way
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to reduce your stress．Last but not least，you ought to believe∧yourself and keep a good state of mind．Follow my tips
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，but you will overcome your exam anxiety．
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1．approach改为approaching；考查with复合结构，with+宾语+宾语补足语，这里approaching作examination的补足语．
2．so改为too；考查too…to…结构意为"如此…以至于"，学生太紧张了，以至于睡不着觉．
3．mentally改为mental；考查形容词，这里修饰名词illness，所以用形容词形式．
4．is改为are；考查系动词，系动词后面的名词是some effective methods，为复数形式，所以用are．
5．去掉plenty前面的a；考查固定短语，plenty of是固定用法，意为"许多，大量"．
6．it改为there；考查句式结构，这里是固定的there be结构．
7．take改为taking；考查动名词的用法，这里动名词短语taking a deep breath 作句子的主语．
8．believe后面加in；考查介词，believe in固定搭配，意为"信任"．
9．yourself 改为yourselves；考查反身代词的复数，根据上下文，主语you应当指的是"你们"，所以后面的反身代词要用复数．
10．but改为and；考查连词，这里是"祈使句+and+简单句"句型，听从我的建议，你就会克服考试焦虑症，所以用but．

点评 短文改错首先要通读全文，掌握短文的中心思想，然后运用所掌握的基础知识详细分析句子结构和句子成分，找出文中的
错误并加以修改．