Question

【题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1）家庭：
2）工作：
3）业余生活。
注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3.开头语已为你写好。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years .I will be twenty –eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world .In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，主题是“十年后的我”。在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手，因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身，度假，聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为是畅想未来，所以要用一般将来时。