题目内容
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel with any luggage. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
buy → buying
here → there
long 前加a
but → and
on → in
was → were
with → without
friend → friend’s
去掉 to
feel → felt
【解析】
试题分析:我的暑假旅行一开始很糟糕。我打算先去杭州的一个朋友那,然后再去厦门,但是买票时不小心被人偷了行李,所有的衣服都在里面,幸好钱还在身上。一直到了朋友家我才可以换换朋友的衣服。
buying在这里表伴随状语。
我去杭州,当然应该是看望那里的朋友。
holiday是可数名词,当然要用a 表一个。
我买了票,转身拿包,前后是并列关系,应该用and。
我所以的钱都在口袋里。所以用in。
clothes做主语,谓语应该用复数were。
旅行不带行李很奇怪,所以用without。
到达朋友的家,应该是用:名词’s,所以是friend’s。
借给某人某物是:lend sb. sth., 所以去掉 to。
全文都用过去时讲述过去的一件事,所以这里还应该是用过去式felt以保持时态的一致性。
考点:短文改错。