题目内容
【题目】假设你是王林,寒假期间你要到伦敦旅游,请你根据以下提示给你的英国好友Alex写一封信,请他推荐一个旅馆,要点如下:
1 介绍你伦敦之行的目的;
2 停留时间:5个晚上,从2月8日到12日;
3 房间要求:预定一个房间,旅馆要靠近公共汽车站;有独立浴室;可以上网;
注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
How is everything going recently?
Yours sincerely;
Wang Lin
【答案】
Dear Alex,
How is everything going recently? I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me.
To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons, I will visit London during the winter holiday. When I am staying there, I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights, from Feb 8 to Feb 12. I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently. In addition, to keep in touch with my family and friends, I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room.
I would appreciate it if you could help me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,sincerely
Wang Lin
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,文章的要点基本上都给出来了,而且很具体,考生要把要点解释清楚,不能有遗漏。在表达要点时,要注意条理清楚,层次分明。在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举要求的时候要使用合适的连接词,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些高级词汇:recommend sth to sb给某人推荐......,keep in touch with联系,gain access to the internet上网。运用了固定句型:I would appreciate it if...如果......我将感激不尽;I am looking forward to your early reply.期待您早日回复。范文中的句式多变,运用了不同的语法知识:To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons运用了动词不定式作目的状语;so that I can take a bus conveniently用了so that引导目的状语从句;I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station这句话在宾语从句里又套用了定语从句。范文中还用了连接副词in addition“另外;并且”,使文章更加通顺。