题目内容
8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last summer，my parents and I had my holiday in Hainan．Before the trip we book plane tickets and hotels on the Internet and got some informations about the places we were going to visit．It was very hot in Hainan that neither of us could stand the heat．Lucky for us，it rained in the first afternoon．The next day，we went to the seaside and lay on the bench，enjoying the beautiful scenery．On third day，we went shopping together and buying lots of seafood for our friends．Although the trip was short，but we had great fun．
分析 去年夏天我和父母一起去海南度假，还介绍了旅行中所发生的一些事情．
解答 Last summer，my parents and I had my holiday in Hainan．Before the trip we book plane tickets and hotels on the Internet and got some informations about the places we were going to visit．It was very hot in Hainan that neither of us could stand the heat．Lucky for us，it rained in the first afternoon．The next day，we went to the seaside and lay on the bench，enjoying the beautiful scenery．On∧third day，we went shopping together and buying lots of seafood for our friends．Although the trip was short，but we had great fun．
详解：
1．my改为our 考察物主代词．本句提到我和父母一起，所以用our．
2．book改为booked 考察动词．时间时去年夏天，所以用一般过去时．
3．informations改为information 考察名词． information为不可数名词．
4．very改为so 考察连接． 本句中是一个固定短语 so…that…如此以至于．
5．neither改为none 考查代词．neither指两者都不，这里父母和我三者以上，用none．
6．Lucky改为Luckily 考查副词．此处用来修饰整个句子，需用副词形式．
7．in改为on 考查介词．固定短语on the first afternoon 意为在第一天下午．
8．on︿third--the 考查冠词．在第三天，third为序数词，前需用the．
9．buying改为bought 考查时态．句子里went和bought并列．
10．去掉but 考查连接词． although引导让步状语从句，不能和but连用．
点评 短文改错主要考查学生对基础知识掌握情况，在平时要多积累一些语法知识结合具体语境灵活使用．
