Question

15．你校高二年级计划在下周一下午4：00-6：00在学校音乐厅举行一年一度的英语剧演出．假定
你是学生会主席李华，请给你们外籍教师Louisa写封邀请函，请她担任评委，对表演作简要点
评，并对获奖者颁发证书（ certificate）．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Louisa，
How are you doing recently？
In order to enrich students'school life，our grade is to hold an annual activity called English Drama Show．（高分句型一）I am writing to invite you，our amazing foreign English teacher，to be our judge．
The activity will be held in the Music Hall next Monday afternoon．The performance is scheduled from 4：00 to 6：00 pm，during which time 14 groups ofperformers representing 14 classes will compete together．（高分句型二）At the end of the contest，you are invited to make a brief comment on the contestants'performances as well as issue the certificates to the winners．（高分句型三）
Your coming is highly appreciated and we are looking forward to your earliest reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息你校高二年级计划在下周一下午4：00-6：00在学校音乐厅举行一年一度的英语剧演出．假定你是学生会主席李华，请给你们外籍教师Louisa写封邀请函，请她担任评委，对表演作简要点评，并对获奖者颁发证书（ certificate），写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：In order to以便，为了；At the end of 在…的最后；as well as 也，和；look forward to盼望；
In order to enrich students'school life，our grade is to hold an annual  activity called English Drama Show．（高分句型一）
The performance is scheduled from 4：00 to 6：00pm，during which time 14 groups of performers representing 14 classes will compete together．（高分句型二）At the end of the contest，you are invited to make a brief comment on the contestants'performances as well as issue the certificates to the winners．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Louisa，
      How are you doing recently？In order to enrich students'school life，our grade is to hold an annual  activity called English Drama Show．（高分句型一）I am writing to invite you，our amazing foreign English teacher，to be our judge．
      The activity will be held  in the Music Hall next Monday afternoon．The performance is scheduled from 4：00 to 6：00 pm，during which time 14 groups of performers representing 14 classes will compete together．（高分句型二）At the end of the contest，you are invited to make a brief comment on the contestants'performances as well as issue the certificates to the winners．（高分句型三）
       Your coming is highly  appreciated and we are looking  forward to your earliest reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．