Question

假定你叫李华，准备写信给学英语报社编辑，反映你最近生活中所遇到的烦恼。

要点如下：

最近遇到一些问题，不知好听何做，希望得到帮助。

你这几年一直是校队很棒的篮球运动员，教练认为你将来有望成为球星。

你父母认为你学习一般，应该在学习上多花时间提高成绩，这样才能上好大学。训练或参加比赛占据了你太多时间，所以没有更多时间用来学习，为此，他们很生气，不允许你参加训练或比赛。

你自己的观念：十分喜欢打球，希望多得到锻炼，成为超级明星。

注意：1.内容应包括提示的全部要点；（请不要逐句翻译以上要点） 

2.词数在100左右；

词汇 ：编辑：editor  教练:  coach   训练: train    超级明星：super star

Dear editor，

I have had a problem recently and I don't know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.                                                                       

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One Possible Version

Dear editor,

  I have had a problem recently and I don’t know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.

  I am an average student in my school. So my parents feel that I should spend more time improving my grades. In this way, I can go to a good university in the future.

  However, I have been playing for the school basketball team for the past few years. My coach thinks I have a chance to become a real future star. As you know, it always takes me a lot of time to practise and take part in games. They are angry with me and don’t allow me to do it again.

  As for me,I like basketball and I hoped I will be well trained and become a super star.

  Look forward to getting your advice soon.

Yours,

Li Hong

【解析】

试题分析：书信应该遵循书信的写作格式，有称呼，正文，结束语。正文是书信的主要部分。称呼语下方开始写正文。正文要言之有物、内容清晰、语言简练、态度谦逊。写给报社编辑的信要根据自己的实际情况，力求详细，诚恳的叙述自己的事情。书信不用很多陈腐词句和无聊套语，力求通俗、简化。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如I don’t know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.Look forward to，it always takes me a lot of time to practice and take part in games.还运用了so引导的结果状语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：In this way,  However,As you know,As for me, 等等。

考点：提纲作文。