题目内容
同学们,你们喜欢My Favorite Film这篇课文吗?除了在文中了解了《音乐之声》的人物、情节、主题、电影的拍摄手法以及作者的评论外,还有吸引你的地方吗?对了,此文语言优美,运用了大量的定语从句,它可以增强句子之间的逻辑性,使文章显得更紧凑。
1.把下列句子合并成一个句子,比较表达方式的差异,说说看你更喜欢哪个句子,为什么?
1)The Sound of Music is a very old film.It won five Oscar rewards.
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2)Guns hold a great interest for boys.Boys like the mystery and the war.The family escapes from the war.
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2.细读课文,再挑出几句好好欣赏欣赏吧!
3.下面这篇文章是李华在网上看过有关东北虎的介绍之后写的一篇短文,喜欢吗?不过,它还有很大的修改空间,利用定语从句帮他润色一下吧。
The Siberian tiger is the largest member of the cat family.It can be found in forests in parts of Siberia(Russia)and Northeast China.It mainly eats deer or wild pigs, but sometimes it also eats fish.The Siberian tiger used to be hunted for its body parts.Its body parts were used in traditional medicine in the past.Today the species is on the brink of extinction.There are about 500 in China.Some of them are in the Hunchun Reserve in Jilin Province.
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解析:
1.1)The Sound of Music is a very old film which won five Oscar rewards.
2)Boys, for whom guns hold a great interest, like the mystery and the war that the family escapes from.
2.略
3.The Siberian tiger is the largest member of the cat family, which can be found in forests in parts of Siberia(Russia)and Northeast China.It mainly eats deer or wild pigs, but sometimes it also eats fish.The Siberian tiger used to be hunted for its body parts, which were used in traditional medicine in the past.Today the species is on the brink of extinction.There are about 500 in China, some of which are in the Hunchun Reserve in Jilin Province.
提示:
优美的文章之所以流畅原因之一就是因为句式不单调,有变化。有时用一个语法结构较为复杂的句子也能为短文增添色彩,比如定语从句。大家在今后的写作中一定要尝试着用哦!