Question

假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：

  *感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助

  *一本英语词典忘记带回

  *词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵

  *词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上

  *邮资自己付

注意：

1、词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

 参考词汇：邮资-postage

Dear Mr. Brown,

__________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

                                                Yours, Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mr. Brown,

   How is everything going?

   I’m the Chinese exchange student who lived in your homefor a year. Thanks for all the help you provided during my stay in America. Your family were very kind, and I will never forget the help you have given me, and the happiness we’ve shared.

   After i arrived home, I found that my English dictionary was left behind. The dictionary was a gift from my American English teacher. It is quite valuable to me, and I hope you can send it to me. I think you will find it on the bookshelf in the bedroom where I stayed. I will gladly pay the postage.

   China is a beautiful country, and I hope that one day you can come to visit me in my home.

   Thanks and all the best.

                                                             Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：作文是比较常见的书信格式，难度不大；所有要点已经给出。书写时，注意书信的格式要正确；作文要包含所有的要点，行文要连贯，突出对布朗先生提供的帮助表示诚挚的谢意，并邀请他来中国。

【亮点说明】How is everything going?一句日常问候的话语，拉近双方的距离。范文使用了定语从句，如“who lived in your homefor a year, you provided during my stay in America, where I stayed”，显示了语法功底。Thanks and all the best.再次感谢并表达美好的祝愿，以此来显示作者的对布朗先生的礼貌和敬意。

考点：书信类材料作文