Question

请以“Magic Power of Words”为题用英文按以下要点写一篇100-120个词的短文。

要点：1. 曾经鼓励我的一句话；

2. 这句话对我生活的影响。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Magic  Power  of  Words

My hardest class in high school was my physical education. We often played volleyball. All the other students were good at it, but I wasn’t. One afternoon, the teacher asked me to hit the ball to my classmates. I was so terrified that I would make a fool of myself. One of the boys on my team saw how nervous I was. He walked up to me and whispered, “Come on, you can do it.”

You can’t imagine how those words of encouragement made me feel. I was so happy; I almost cried. I managed to hit the ball.

I have never forgotten his kind words of encouragement. Whenever things aren’t going well, I think of those simple words: Come on, you can do it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇记叙文的写作，记叙一句鼓励的话对自己的影响，写作前首先要对这件事进行构思，然后写作时要注意写作顺序，时态，句子连贯等问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的句型，使用一些高级词汇和高级句型使文章看起来有档次。

考点：语言组织能力。

点评：记叙文写作注意记叙文的写作要素，时间，地点，事件等。考生平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文。