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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
     2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分．
Last week，my mother and I went to shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoes for me．When we got here，I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl．But the salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying．They looked very worrying．So I decided to help them．I went up to the foreign lady and talked to her by English．I learned that the lady came from Australia and wanted to buy a pair of running shoe．I told this to the salesgirl．The lady was very much glad when she took her shoes．All of them expressed their thanks to me．And I fell happy that I could help others．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要讲述了作者帮助一位外国人买鞋的经历．上周，作者和妈妈去一家鞋店买鞋，当时注意到一位外国女士和销售的女孩说话，但是那个女孩不懂外国说什么．作者决定帮助她们．最后那位外国女士买到了鞋，能帮助他人作者感到非常高兴．

解答 Last week，my mother and I went to/\shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoes for me．When we got here，
                                                    a                                                                                       there
I noticed a foreign lady  talk to a salesgirl．But the salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying．
                                   talking                                                                         what
They looked very worrying．So I decided to help them．I went up to the foreign lady and talked to her by English．
                            worried                                                                                                                 in
I learned that the lady came from Australia and wanted to buy a pair of running shoe．I told this to the salesgirl．
                                                                                                                    shoes
The lady was very much glad when she took her shoes．All of them expressed their thanks to me．And I fell happy that I could help others．
                           去掉                                                Both                                                                 felt
1．shoe shop  前面加a，考查冠词，shop是可数名词单数，文章中第一次出现的时候用不定冠词．
2．here--there．考查副词． 本文主要是陈述过去的事情，所以应该是"当我们到达那里"．
3．talk--talking，考查非谓语动词，notice sb doing sth表示注意到某人做某事．
4．that--what，考查名词性从句． 本句中含有宾语从句，从句中缺少宾语，所以用what．
5．worrying--worried．考查形容词． 本句中主语是人，所以应该用-ed形式的形容词，-ing形式的形容词修饰物．
6．by--in，考查介词搭配． 用英语说话，应该用介词in．
7．shoe--shoes，考查名词单复数．shoe是可数名词，一双鞋是两只鞋，所以要用复数形式．
8．去掉much，考查副词． 非常高兴直接用very修饰，very much通常修饰动词．
9．All--Both，考查代词．文章中感谢作者的是那位外国女士和买鞋的女孩，应该是两个人，所以用both．
10，fell--felt．考查动词过去式． 文中表示"我感到高兴"，而fell是fall的过去式，feel的过去式应该是felt．

点评 本篇短文改错考查冠词，动词形式，名词单复数，时态等，平时注重多积累，答题时结合句意和语法进行分析，答完后通读，是否通顺，符合逻辑．