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6.假定你是李华,最近有家网站以"看到有老人摔倒你是否会上前救助"为题邀请公众展开讨论.请你写一篇文章参与该网站的讨论.内容包括:
1.你的做法
2.你的原因
3.你的倡议
注意:1.可适当增加细节
      2.词数100词左右,开头已给出(不计入总词数)
I'm Li Hua,a senior three student.About this heated d iscussion,_________________
___________________________________________________________________________________

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息最近有家网站以"看到有老人摔倒你是否会上前救助"为题邀请公众展开讨论.请你写一篇文章参与该网站的讨论,写作时注意以下几点:根据其题干中的写作要点可以将文章分三段来阐述:第一段要言简意赅,直接表明自己的做法.第二段中,说明自己这样做的原因.如果选择"上前救助",原因可能有:(1)及时的救助可以使在困难中的人减少危险;(2)帮助他人是中国的传统美德;(3)设身处地得设想别人的处境等.第三段中,主要是将自己的论点进一步阐述,呼吁大家也这样做.可以使用I hope that…这样的句型.
2.注意在书写的时候,保证字迹工整,以及词汇和语法的正确使用.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:in need困境中;There is no denying that…不可否认;What's more而且;especially尤其,特别;Firstly首先;Besides另外;in this way 以这种方式;
There is no denying that helping people is a fundamental element of social morality and a symbol of civilized society.(高分句型一)
What's more,it is better to put ourselves in others'place,especially in this case.(高分句型二)
It is a sad situation if such a case occurs to us one day when we're old and no one helps us.(高分句型三)
Only in this way are people willing to offer help.(高分句型四)

解答 I am Li Hua,a senior two student.About this heated discussion,I will definitely help people in need.
    There is no denying that helping people is a fundamental element of social morality and a symbol of civilized society.(高分句型一)If no one helps them,it may increase their risk of serious injury,even losing their lives.What's more,it is better to put ourselves in others'place,especially in this case.(高分句型二) Everyone will become old.It is a sad situation if such a case occurs to us one day when we're old and no one helps us.(高分句型三)
    So I strongly hope that such tragedy should never occur again.Firstly,helping the elderly in need should be advocated.Besides,more efforts should be done to guarantee the benefits of people who offer help.Only in this way are people willing to offer help.(高分句型四)

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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