题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,Harry是你的美国笔友。在来信中谈到华盛顿的国会图书馆。你常常去北京的中国国家图书馆。于是你回信向他介绍这个图书馆。
注意:
1.信的开头已为你写好;
2.词数不少于100。
位置面积 | 北京城西,紫竹院公园旁 24万平方米,地上19层,地下3层,世界第三 |
藏书规模 | 2200万册,居亚洲之首 |
服务项目 | 图书借阅;网上服务 |
使用观感 | 设备先进,服务优质;环境幽雅,令人享受 |
提示词:设备facilities
Dear Harry,
How are things going with you? Talking about famous libraries, I would like to introduce to you about our National Library.________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Harry,
How are things going with you? Talking about famous libraries, I would like to introduce to you about our National Library. The library, with Zi Zhuyuan Park as its neighbor, is located in the west of Beijing. It covers an area of 240,000 square meters, with 19 stories above the ground, and 3 stories underground, ranking the third in the world. The library has a total collection of over 22,000,000 copies of books ,the largest number in Asia. It provides readers with spacious reading rooms, convenient online service and the latest web information. Its grand building, modern facilities and good service will surely leave you a very deep impression. No. 9 bus can pick me up from home and drop me right in front of the library, so I often go there to study or to borrow books. I enjoy the quiet and literary atmosphere in the library.
Hope you can visit it some day and I’m looking forward to your next letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本次作文要求你给你的美国笔友Harry回信,向他介绍北京的中国国家图书馆。要点包括:1.位置面积:北京城西,紫竹院公园旁24万平方米,地上19层,地下3层,世界第三;2. 藏书规模:2200万册,居亚洲之首;3. 服务项目:图书借阅;网上服务;3. 使用观感:设备先进,服务优质;环境幽雅,令人享受。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章里运用了现在分词作状语It covers an area of 240,000 square meters, with 19 stories above the ground, and 3 stories underground, ranking the third in the world.和be located in,spacious等词汇。