Question

请你根据下列提示，并结合你校园生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

The power of praise is great. Praise can help people build their confidence and go through ups and downs.

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

From my point of view, with praise from others, we will overcome any obstacles on the way to success.

Few months ago, I was depressed because of my failure in a series of tests. Therefore, absorbed in my negative mood, I didn’t pay much attention to study. My teacher found my abnormal behavior and had a talk with me. I had thought he would criticize me, but he didn’t. He just said, “You are such a clever and hardworking boy. I believe you won’t let people around you down.” It was his praise that inspired me with confidence and made me realized that I shouldn’t give up. From then on, I studied harder than before and got good marks at length.

Praise is the best virtue. Only with praise can we have the confidence to defeat problems and move forward.

【解析】

试题分析：本文写作的话题是表扬的力量。接受了别人的表扬，可以让我们有信心来克服生活指的困难，走向成功。考生可以用自己生活中的具体的事例来证明这个观点的正确性，既可以是自己的例子也可以是身边人的例子。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：考察开放性短文写作

点评：开放性作文只给出了一个话题，给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。