短文改错(满分10分 All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect． It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I want 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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短文改错（满分10分

All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect．” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found difficult to control my body．I just sank into the water．I feel very frightened．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised．A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim．How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before．

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All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect．” It tells us unless we want

makes if

to realize our aim, we should practise and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found∧difficult to control

my body．I just sank into the water．I feel very frightened．Then I watched others

felt

who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming

it success

pool every day, learned from them and practised．A day, when my friend pushed me

One

into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim．How exciting I was!

suddenly excited

Now I can swim much more better than before．

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