Question

5．请根据下列提示要点，以"The Ways to Keep Healthy"为题，写一篇短文．
1．健康很重要，人人都想保持健康．
2．饮食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素（fibre）和维生素（vitamin）；少吃黄油（butter）、奶酪（cheese）、咖啡和巧克力（chocolate），因为它们含糖（sugar）和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖．
3．有良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，充足的睡眠，不要过度劳累，不抽烟等等．
要求：
1．短文须包括上述所有要点，可以适当增加细节，使短文连贯．
2．词数约80-100．
The Ways to Keep Healthy．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇议论文．就题目要求可知用第二人称和一般现在时态来叙述．内容主要包括：一点题；二饮食要健康；三有良好的生活习惯；四总结．
高分句型：
1．It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fiber and vitamins．句子里
It做形式主语，代指to eat fresh fruit and vegetables；because引导原因状语从句．
吃新鲜的水果和蔬菜更好，因为它们含有很多纤维和维生素．
2．Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．
句子里which引导定语从句，代指先行词 the food．
不要吃含有糖分和脂肪太多的食物，例如黄油，奶酪，咖啡和巧克力．

解答 Health is very is important to us．Everyone hopes to be in good health．But how？Here are some ways to keep healthy．（点题）
      First，you need a healthy diet．It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fiber and vitamins．【高分句型一】Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．【高分句型二】Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily．（饮食要健康）Second，good living habits are very important．You should do regular exercise to build up your body．Besides，enough rest is necessary for your health．You need 8 hours'sleep a night and don't work too hard．Smoking is a bad habit，so never smoke．（有良好的生活习惯）
     In a word，healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy．（总结）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．