Question

请你根据下列提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈“感恩”的意义。

When we grow up, we often get a lot of love, support and help from our teachers, friends as well as our parents. However, we seldom express our gratitude to them. Being grateful to others is what we shouldn’t forget.

注意： 1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英文提示语；

2. 或者列举生活中的事例，或者谈谈自己的看法；字数120左右。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

As middle school students, not only should we acquire knowledge but also we should have good qualities. I think expressing our gratitude to people who helped us is one of the good qualities we must possess.

Two years ago, my classmate, Wang Wei ran into difficulty because his father was diagnosed with lung cancer. His father’s illness added to his family’s trouble, so Wang Wei was in danger of dropping out of school. After hearing about his bad situation, our head teacher gave him timely help by allowing him to continue his schooling without any tuition. With the help of the teacher and classmates, Wang has finished school. Just before this important exam he wrote us a letter expressing his thanks for what we have done. We were deeply moved by his letter.

Being grateful to people who helped and supported us is what we are supposed to keep in mind foever.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求学生根据英文提示写一篇关于“感恩”的文章，谈一谈感恩的意义。注意不得照抄提示，可以列举生活中的例子，也可以写自己的看法。尽可能多使用固定句型、定语从句、非谓语动词、强调、倒装等语法知识；另外，注意拼写和标点的正确使用。

亮点说明：范文使用了倒装not only should we acquire knowledge but also we should have good qualities.；定语从句who helped us，we must possess，who helped and supported us；非谓语动词作伴随状语expressing his thanks；宾语从句what we have done；表语从句what we are supposed to keep in mind foever等语法知识，使作文长短结合、错落有致，语法功底较好；

范文使用了较多的短语动词：ran into遇到；was diagnosed with诊断患有；added to增加；in danger of面临；dropping out of退出；hear about听说；With the help of在......的帮助之下等，丰富了作文的内容；

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