Question

6．假设你是张华，现就读于Toronto大学．请就你的室友Tom的不文明表现写信给好友David求助．
 1．不讲卫生（sanitation）；
 2．休息时间大声播放音乐；
 3．随意动用他人物品；
 4．常带朋友喝酒喧闹．
注意：1）信的开头已给出；
2）字数：120-150词左右．

Answer 1

分析 考查了提纲类作文的写作，文章的话题是关于室友的不文明表现，要点都已经给了出来，只需要翻译成英文即可，在写作时注意使用合适的连接词把各要点联系在一起，同时注意使用高级的词汇和句型如倒装句，强调句，省略句等形式让句子充满变化．
He pays no attention to the room sanitation，and often leaves his things about．（高分句型）pay attention to 关注
What's worse，he often brings his friends here to drink，talking and laughing loudly．（高分句型）What's worse，更糟的是，

解答 One possible version：
Dear David，
I am studying in the Toronto University．Now I have some problems with my room-mate，Tom，and I am writing to ask you for help．Tom is basically a good guy．But he doesn't care much about some of his behaviors．He pays no attention to the room sanitation，and often leaves his things about．（高分句型） He plays very loud music during the rest time．At times，I find him using others daily things without permission．What's worse，he often brings his friends here to drink，talking and laughing loudly．（高分句型） I have been trying to ask him not to do that，but he doesn't listen to me．What shall I do？Would you be so kind as to give me some advice？Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang Hua

点评 本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果