Question

5．请以下列词组为关键线索，写一篇以"Makeourcitiesgreener"为标题的英语短文．
fewer trees          many advantages          more efforts
注意：
1．必须使用所给的3个关键词组；
2．词数不少于120个．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲类作文，根据所给关键线索，写一篇英语短文，内容关于使我们的城市更环保，写作时应包含所给关键词：越来越少的树；许多优点；更多的努力．写作要点：1．城市环境现状；2．环保的意义；3．号召呼吁大家共同努力．
重点短语：
prevent sb from doing（阻止某人做某事）；think of （思考）；take action to（采取行动做某事）
高分句型：
1．With industries and business developing quickly，there are fewer trees around us．With the number of trees in many big cities reducing dramatically，efforts are being made to prevent people from cutting more trees．这两句话为形式一致的排比句，并灵活地运用了词汇及短语，详细描述了环境现状．
2．People in every field should not only know about the importance of keeping the quality of urban environment，but also take common action to plant more trees and flowers so as to improve our living conditions．该句运用了in every field；the number of；the quality of；take action to等短语，呼吁号召大家共同努力环保．

解答 Make Our Cities Greener
With industries and business developing quickly，there are fewer trees around us．With the number of trees in many big cities reducing dramatically，efforts are being made to prevent people from cutting more trees．But a lot of trees are being destroyed by people who have never thought of the importance of green plants．Making cities greener has many advantages．（环境现状）
First，it can make our air cleaner．Some researchers have proved that trees can reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption．Second，it can make our cities more beautiful．With trees and flowers everywhere，living conditions can be improved．Finally，it can produce timber----an effective way to solve the problems of limited supply of natural resources．（环保意义）
Making our cities greener requires more efforts．People in every field should not only know about the importance of keeping the quality of urban environment，but also take common action to plant more trees and flowers so as to improve our living conditions．（呼吁及号召）

点评 提纲类作文在写作时要注意内容是否切合所给主题，包含所给要点，写作时注意正确运用时态，上下文注意连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要注意积累短语和重要句型．