题目内容
13.假定你是李明,寒假将至,你和全家准备外出旅游,请写封信给你的英国朋友David,告诉他你的旅游计划及活动安排,包括旅游目的地,出发时间,逗留时间等.字数在100词左右.信的开头、结尾已给出,Dear David,
How are you?
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It sounds great,doesn't it?What are you going to do in your winter vacation?I can't wait to know about it!
Love
Li Ming.
分析 本篇书面表达书信作文,根据提示信息给英国朋友David写一封信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:告诉他你的旅游计划及活动安排,包括旅游目的地,出发时间,逗留时间等 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态. 注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:
My family intends to go to Shangdong Province because none of us have ever been there before.(高分句型一)intend to do 打算做某事
Moreover,we can also visit Qufu,where Confucius was buried.(高分句型二)moreover 而且;本句带有where引导的定语从句
解答 Dear David,
How are you?
I'm writing to you about my travelling plan for the coming winter vacation.(写作目的)
My family intends to go to Shangdong Province because none of us have ever been there before.(高分句型一) If we go,we will have an active holiday climbing Mount Tai.Besides,we can explore famous lakes and springs in Ji'nan.Moreover,we can also visit Qufu,where Confucius was buried.(高分句型二) I think we will enjoy our stay there.We plan to travel in the Spring Festival,between Feb 12th and Feb16th,lasting 5 days and 4 nights.It costs only 1300 yuan per person.
It sounds great,doesn't it?What are you going to do in your winter vacation?I can't wait to know about it!
Love
Li Ming.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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