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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Today is Mother's Day．I love Mother too much that I've done many things for her．In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put it in the vase as soon as I returned to home．In the afternoon I went to the market to buy different kind of vegetables and cooked a simple and delicious dinner for my family．After supper，I gave Mother the card that I made by myself and said"Happy Mother's Day"to her．Then I tell her to pay more attention to her healthy and not to overwork．I also promised to help her do many housework from today on．Hearing the words，Mother moved to tears．
Today is the special day，warm and meaningful．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍了作者是如何为自己深爱的妈妈庆祝母亲节的．

解答 Today is Mother's Day．I love Mothertoomuch that I've done many things for her．
In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put it in the vase as soon
as I returnedto home．In the afternoon I went to the market to buy different kindof vegetables
and cooked a simple anddelicious dinner for my family．After supper，I gave Mother the card
that I made by myself and said"Happy Mother's Day"to her．Then Itellher to pay more attention
to her healthy and not to overwork．I also promised to help her do many housework from today on．
Hearing the words，Mother∧moved to tears．
Today is the special day，warm and meaningful．
详解：
1．too改为so    考查固定句型    so…that…意为：如此…以至于…；本句的意思是：我是如此地爱妈妈，以至于我为她做了很多事情；故用that．
2．it改为them    考查人称代词的一致性    此处在句中作动词put的宾语，指代的是many flowers，故用them．
3．去掉returned后的to    考查副词   由于home在本句中是副词，所以不能用介词修饰，故去掉returned之后的to．
4．kind改为kinds    名词的单复数   此处指的是各种不同种类的蔬菜，故用复数名词kinds．
5．第二个and改为but    考查句意理解及连词  这里指的是：一顿简单但美味的晚餐，此处表示转折而非并列关系；故用but．
6．tell改为told   考查时态    根据上文可知，此处指的是今天晚饭后发生的事情，应使用一般过去时，故用told．
7．healthy改为health    考查名词    此处用在形容词性的物主代词her之后，在句中作介词to的宾语，故用名词health．
8．many改为much    考查形容词   many修饰可数名词，much修饰不可数名词；此处用来修饰不可数名词housework，故用much．
9．moved前加was    考查一般过去时态的被动语态      根据上文可知，此处描述的是今天晚饭后发生的事情，应使用一般过去时；由于主语Mother与动词move之间构成被动关系，所以此处应使用一般过去时态的被动语态，故在moved前加was．   
10．the改为a   考查冠词   此处用来修饰名词day，表示泛指"一个特别的日子"；故用a．

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．